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    dots Submission Name: My Life Is Like Guerrilla Warfaredots

    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       It was meant to be a rap song, but I kinda didn't know how to fix it up completely, so I made it like I'm fighting a battle with my life, that I've never fought.

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    dotsMy Life Is Like Guerrilla Warfaredots

    I'm ready for war,
    Ready for the millennium of,
    Hollowtips and bullet holes,
    Deep beyond the horizon,
    Anything to earn the recognition,
    That my self-esteem is rising.
    I'm always crazed out whenever I hear the truth,
    I live my life in the future,
    Like I run around clones and robot troops,
    Hiding behind timid figures,
    Forever bulletproof.

    How many motherfuckers,
    Wanna play their position,
    I'm a sniper in the game,
    With just one mission;
    To take the enemy out,
    Confronted by guerilla warfare in collision,
    A life of Penitentaries and prisons,
    With no spiritual believe,
    Or God supervision.

    I'm living life in the flesh,
    So anything moving around my zone,
    Can get put to rest,
    I must confess,
    I wish I never was involved in this mess,
    That's why I smoke one to the brain,
    Just to alleviate the stress.

    Submitted on 2006-11-23 20:44:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      your getting more ghetto huh now that your back in LA! im waiting to read something more positive and new from you..and i really like that word "Penitentiary", ima use it as a title to my next poem. thanx for reminding me ;)

    i can say i like this better as a lyric than a poem but keep writing and ill keep reading till the better
    | Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by Ani | [ Reply to This ]

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