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    dots Submission Name: live for?dots

    Author: lauren hamill
    ASL Info:    24/f/can't say really.
    Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 52/30/14
    Words: 177
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       yeah, i don't know. just feel like writing and spewing shit from my mouth. say whatever you want!

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    dotslive for?dots

    Someone asked me once,
    “What is it you live for? What
    gives you that rush?”
    I sat there, searching, contemplating
    In my mind. I felt so empty
    That nothing struck me inside.

    And, then, years later
    That question rose in my head.
    And instead of nothingness, the
    Answers came to me with
    Nauseating optimism.

    I live for Life, and
    Life Itself,
    (I said to myself)
    I live for the pain I feel,
    The tears I cry that are real,
    (I said to myself)
    I live each day for the plan,
    I once made. Even, if,
    Ultimately, it has been undone.
    (I said to myself)
    Unravelling at the seams,
    Out-of-control, so to speak.
    It doesn’t scare me
    I don’t feel emptiness, because
    I couldn’t reply with anything.
    Because, to say something,
    Would have been a lie.
    And, in hindsight,
    I now know what it is
    That keeps my heart ticking
    At night. It is that, and that
    Alone. Life, why can’t
    That be enough?
    (I say to myself)

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      because we always want something more... its human nature... we're always looking for something to fill our time...
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]
      This was a greta work of art it really shows me, and made me imagine everything you could have gone through, everything i've gone through, what i truly live for, would have to be showing people they are wrong about me, showing people i can be better, i can get better at anything i want to, no matter how much pain, no matter how much sorrow, no matter what i will always keep on fightin untill i succeed,
    great piece though its got amazing flow.

    | Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by panzyrocker | [ Reply to This ]

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