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    dots Submission Name: *Things we do*dots
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    Author: pixie_007
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 45/77/63
    Words: 213
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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    dots*Things we do*dots
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    sometimes we fight and at times we do things out of spite.
    sometimes we keep secrets and at times we even tell lies
    sometimes i say things that hurt your heart, sometimes you say things that make me feel as though you dont care
    even when u dont call or send me a message
    i dont mind because i know in my heart that you miss me too
    and all those times when you say that you'll come over but you never do or you come real late
    i sit up all night waiting for you anyway
    and even though you sometimes need to get away from me or when i wake up beside you in the morning,i know everything's going to be alright because we have each other...

    and i love you...

    i'll stand by you no matter what,share with you your hopes and dreams,believe in you even when you're wrong. and when it seems that u put all your friends before me i keep in the shadows because i know u already gave your heart to me...
    i'll always be there for you,time and time again.
    i'll never let you down,i'll never turn my back on you,even if u left me side i'd still be true to you...




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