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*All too much*

Author: pixie_007
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Words: 202
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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*All too much*

Its been almost an eternity that's passed me by,still I wait for your return.
You've been gone for so long its like you were never here.
Loneliness has closed in around me and dispair is slowly setting in.
My emptiness burns deep inside my tired heart.
But all I can do is hope to see you again someday soon.
I dream of you everynight,hoping my dreams find reality.
And as far as reality goes,my dreams stay empty wishes.
I can only wish you were here to put my mind at ease and calm my soul.
I long for your company,that conversations that keep me wondering,I long for you...
Its been forever since I saw you and looked into your eyes.
I want to tell you of things unheard of,show you places unseen.
I want you to see my world,it been waiting for you for so long
Its been witing here my whole life in fact.
But all I really want is to hear your voice Maybe even hear you say you miss me
and make my heart believe that it hasn't been lied to...
But all these words that say all these things mean all too much all at once...

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