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    dots Submission Name: *A beautiful Betrayal*dots
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    Author: pixie_007
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 45/77/63
    Words: 345
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    dots*A beautiful Betrayal*dots
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    Every morning when I wake,he's there waiting
    He watches me sleep as I dream often of him
    He's the love of my life,my ultimate friend
    He's the one I adore,and I will till the end...

    He promised never to let go
    But he let go
    He said he's always going to be behind me
    But one day he just wasn't

    He told me to go ahead,he'll be right there
    So I took his word for it and took the lead
    Everything went well,I knew he's there for me
    So I kept doing what I was doing so well

    But then my doubts jumped before me
    And fear of losing control welled inside
    I need you now,will you be there for me?
    But when I turned around he was gone

    He promised never to let go
    Be he did let go
    He said he's always going to be behind me
    But on that day he just wasn't

    My legs felt funny and they stopped moving
    My bike slowed as my feet stopped turning
    I could feel the ground coming closer to me
    And I hit the tar road with an enormous thud

    I stood up,my tears ready to stream down
    I turned to my father and called out to him
    "Why did you let go?You broke your promise!"
    And suddenly he lost that place in my heart

    My father ran to me and smiled a wide smile,
    "There are so many things known to the world
    yet only I know the capabilities of my babygirl
    And that's why I believed in you Pixie!"

    He pointed towards something and I turned
    His car stood there,along the orange horizon
    My breath caught in my throught as I saw it
    I went a whole thirty feet all on my own!

    But I'm all grown up and i'v moved far away
    & that's how learned to ride a bike that day!
    I never thought he'd betray my trust at all
    And I still love him,even after that nasty fall!




    Submitted on 2006-11-24 15:06:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Thats was a classy almost crass read.
    Made me think of sweet times in love.
    It was gental an yet a cliff-hanger.Thank you
    for the memorie.
    | Posted on 2007-01-07 00:00:00 | by invader | [ Reply to This ]


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