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*A beautiful Betrayal*

Author: pixie_007
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*A beautiful Betrayal*

Every morning when I wake,he's there waiting
He watches me sleep as I dream often of him
He's the love of my life,my ultimate friend
He's the one I adore,and I will till the end...

He promised never to let go
But he let go
He said he's always going to be behind me
But one day he just wasn't

He told me to go ahead,he'll be right there
So I took his word for it and took the lead
Everything went well,I knew he's there for me
So I kept doing what I was doing so well

But then my doubts jumped before me
And fear of losing control welled inside
I need you now,will you be there for me?
But when I turned around he was gone

He promised never to let go
Be he did let go
He said he's always going to be behind me
But on that day he just wasn't

My legs felt funny and they stopped moving
My bike slowed as my feet stopped turning
I could feel the ground coming closer to me
And I hit the tar road with an enormous thud

I stood up,my tears ready to stream down
I turned to my father and called out to him
"Why did you let go?You broke your promise!"
And suddenly he lost that place in my heart

My father ran to me and smiled a wide smile,
"There are so many things known to the world
yet only I know the capabilities of my babygirl
And that's why I believed in you Pixie!"

He pointed towards something and I turned
His car stood there,along the orange horizon
My breath caught in my throught as I saw it
I went a whole thirty feet all on my own!

But I'm all grown up and i'v moved far away
& that's how learned to ride a bike that day!
I never thought he'd betray my trust at all
And I still love him,even after that nasty fall!

Submitted on 2006-11-24 15:06:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Thats was a classy almost crass read.
Made me think of sweet times in love.
It was gental an yet a cliff-hanger.Thank you
for the memorie.
| Posted on 2007-01-07 00:00:00 | by invader | [ Reply to This ]

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