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    dots Submission Name: *Just for you*dots
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    Author: pixie_007
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 45/77/63
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1053
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dots*Just for you*dots
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    Despite the times and despite the days
    Despite my habits and depsite my ways
    With all my Love I'll cherish you
    Untill the day my time is through

    I'll steal the moon and millions of stars
    And collect many planets like Jupiter and Mars
    I'll gather all the galaxies for you to hold
    Because to me,you're worth more than gold



    *I'll love you forever...




    Submitted on 2006-11-24 15:14:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this. You're very direct in how you convey your feelings. Though short and sweet It seems genuinely from the heart. Very nice.

    Owlman
    | Posted on 2006-11-27 00:00:00 | by owlman23 | [ Reply to This ]


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