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    dots Submission Name: When I Was A Kiddots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 680
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    Description:
       Reminiscing


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    dotsWhen I Was A Kiddots
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    Every day on the way to my elementary,
    I used to see people slang drugs,
    Thiefs, gang members and street thugs,
    And I thought it was always meant to be.

    Witness my Dad beat on my Momz,
    And when he was done with her,
    The feeling in the air of being scared,
    Made it seem life wasn't fair.

    After my father passed away,
    My Mother felt hopeless and stray,
    Left abondoned in her own way,
    As a result of that,
    She turned bitter and cold after that day.

    When I was a kid,
    I used to cherish the tomorrow today,
    Too much violence so we couldn't play,
    Nowadays,
    I just close my eyes and pray,
    Just so that my childhood,
    Stays far from a replay.




    Submitted on 2006-11-24 21:10:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this a good poem, i liked the second stanza, i went through that myself so i know how you feel, there are someparts of my chuldhood that i would rather forget. nice work.
    gerry
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by bogeyman | [ Reply to This ]


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