Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Things No One Dared To Dodots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/153/74
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 515
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 378



    Description:
       Short and not very put together... Thoughts??


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsThings No One Dared To Dodots
    -------------------------------------------


    Lie to me
    Tell me I am beautiful
    Kiss me
    Make me feel like a fool
    Touch me
    Make me fall for you
    Call me
    Make me confused
    Hurt me
    Make me feel the pain
    Love me
    Make me want the shame
    Hold me
    Make me feel for you
    Do the things to me,
    That no one has ever dared to do.




    Submitted on 2006-11-24 21:58:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      My Dear you have come into your own. Now you know no bounds. Be still my friend you have found you.

    An admirer always,
    Jay.
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]
      I love it! I like the strong feeling.
    Keep up the good writeing,
    Jenny
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by Darklonelygirl | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't think this needs anything! This is a lovely piece, and even better, it reflects the confusion and angst of adolescence, which adds charm to the poetry! This is very good!
    | Posted on 2006-11-25 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Short, sweet an perfect. A great piece renae, you're a really good poet renae. well done, cannae wait to read more of yer stuff. x

    ~lou~
    | Posted on 2006-11-25 00:00:00 | by elseibi | [ Reply to This ]
      aww this may have been a little short, but it didn't need anymore! i like this write alot. very sweet. i'm looking forward to reading more from you..
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this one!! It reminds me of this insudent that i had. But i will not explain that at this very moment. So keep on writing and express your self. DOn't hold it inside because you'll hurt your self. I love you. It is just part of a poem so don't take offense.
    | Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by bleeding_sin | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    126463

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    going,,,"Skin." written by teika5
    Meaningless Meanings written by ForgottenGraves
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    Snippet written by Daniel Barlow
    Rooted in Nature written by Chelebel
    Hyle written by endlessgame23
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    Night- time written by Daniel Barlow
    Sword in the Water written by Wolfwatching
    Beauty Rest written by jackz
    The Curtain Call written by faideddarkness
    A bit of Pain written by teika5
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    The Want written by Daniel Barlow
    Dream written by closetpoet
    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    untitled written by Outlaw
    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    The World written by jjd
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    Untitled written by Daniel Barlow
    Honeymoon written by TheStillSilence
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    Johnny's Cock written by endlessgame23
    Lie back & tan written by Daniel Barlow
    Gaia written by endlessgame23
    None the Wiser written by endlessgame23

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry