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    dots Submission Name: Things No One Dared To Dodots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 541
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 378



    Description:
       Short and not very put together... Thoughts??


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    dotsThings No One Dared To Dodots
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    Lie to me
    Tell me I am beautiful
    Kiss me
    Make me feel like a fool
    Touch me
    Make me fall for you
    Call me
    Make me confused
    Hurt me
    Make me feel the pain
    Love me
    Make me want the shame
    Hold me
    Make me feel for you
    Do the things to me,
    That no one has ever dared to do.




    Submitted on 2006-11-24 21:58:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      My Dear you have come into your own. Now you know no bounds. Be still my friend you have found you.

    An admirer always,
    Jay.
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]
      I love it! I like the strong feeling.
    Keep up the good writeing,
    Jenny
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by Darklonelygirl | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't think this needs anything! This is a lovely piece, and even better, it reflects the confusion and angst of adolescence, which adds charm to the poetry! This is very good!
    | Posted on 2006-11-25 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Short, sweet an perfect. A great piece renae, you're a really good poet renae. well done, cannae wait to read more of yer stuff. x

    ~lou~
    | Posted on 2006-11-25 00:00:00 | by elseibi | [ Reply to This ]
      aww this may have been a little short, but it didn't need anymore! i like this write alot. very sweet. i'm looking forward to reading more from you..
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this one!! It reminds me of this insudent that i had. But i will not explain that at this very moment. So keep on writing and express your self. DOn't hold it inside because you'll hurt your self. I love you. It is just part of a poem so don't take offense.
    | Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by bleeding_sin | [ Reply to This ]


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