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    dots Submission Name: Only Medots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsOnly Medots
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    If I gave you my heart...
    would you take it with care?
    or would you break it..
    and leave me standing there....
    never say you love me
    if its never really there
    to many times ive broken
    and cried myself to sleep
    its like a routine
    i expect to see
    finally someone loved me
    but i didnt want to believe
    i fucked it all up
    and now its only me




    Submitted on 2006-11-25 00:34:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow this piece was so full of pain and it read so true, i did the same thing except i havent found the one who loves me yet. joanna
    | Posted on 2006-11-25 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]
      so power and on the mark~you showed how it is ~
    I could feel the pain~I liked It~
    | Posted on 2006-11-25 00:00:00 | by ms.v | [ Reply to This ]
      Real emotion in this piece, i like it. This is a really sweet piece. No changes needed. can't wair to readmore of ure stuff. x

    ~lou~
    | Posted on 2006-11-25 00:00:00 | by elseibi | [ Reply to This ]


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