Description: The truth for people who are constantly confused about love....
Love is trickery.... -------------------------------------------
It seems that I live my life
With everyday a push or shuve
And then when a day is done
They say that it's for love
What is that four-lettered word
I hear it many times
But mostly it's when I'm good
And havent comitted any crimes
I get confused when they say it
And as soon as it leaves their lips
I'm left in puzzlement and confusion
Fore I believe love is just a word
A word said for an excuse
Sonething that's ment to be heard
Something that's supposed to produce
A smile or a hug
But sometimes I refuse
I can ony shrug and say
"What is that word love?"
I think it rhymes. I can sort of hear the similar sounding words. Otherwise however, I'd say this is a good first piece. Love is confusing and very often just thrown around like a byword for this and that. Cheers, keep writing. Azuire
The rhyme scheme is confusing... add some more rhymes, and you spelled a word or two wrong. Other than that, I get what you're saying. The word love is thrown around alot, and it's difficult to find out who means it or not. Good poem.
Submission Name: Love is trickery....
