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    dots Submission Name: THIS IS PERFECTdots

    Author: HECATE_Sservant
    ASL Info:    20/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    3.42 - 126/142/44
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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       There's so much more to say. But no more words to explain. I'm in love. End of story...

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    dotsTHIS IS PERFECTdots

    The lights are dimmed.
    Your eyes meet mine.
    Something that simple
    could make me cry.

    Because all at once it hits me,
    that you love me for who I am.
    You see through all the fuck-ups and imperfections,
    and you find something good.

    It just still amazes me that something good, I have inside, is worth your time and love...

    I kiss your soft, sweet lips and sink down in the sheets, as your warmth fills me.

    It's your love that gives me life.
    I was a corpse before you came,
    but you've brought me back,
    and given me a life worth living.

    Right now, I'm looking ridiculus.
    Oh! But here comes your smile.
    This all just feels so perfect.
    Will you stay with me awhile?

    Submitted on 2006-11-25 15:48:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      lovely, it reminds me of how i felt with my old lover, i still feel the same for him but he is gone from me now. its a lovely poem dear, and love is a great thing isnt it?
    | Posted on 2006-11-25 00:00:00 | by BloodyMary87 | [ Reply to This ]
      now this is what it's all about.... the little things.this is great. i love the description you give for this piece, too. says it all really.
    excellent stuff...i enjoyed this.
    | Posted on 2006-11-25 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]

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