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    dots Submission Name: I didn't seedots
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    Author: Orcelandrya
    ASL Info:    18/f/ont
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 18/8/9
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 115
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 495



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       about looking back on a realtionship realizing you did something wrong and the end of it may have been your fault.....


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    I never thought it would come to this
    Never thought we'd say goodbye.
    But we grew apart as time passed,
    And we lost the will to try.
    I never noticed all the silence,
    Or the times you just weren't there.
    I ignored all the time we'd argued,
    Or pretended not to care.
    I guess I should have saw it,
    should have known something was wrong.
    But I never got the chance to see,
    Because I waited far too long.....




    Submitted on 2006-11-25 20:23:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      sad..I have felt this before. this brings a tear to my eye. I remember all the bad things that I did that caused a relationship to go sour. you just have to learn and not do it again next time.
    | Posted on 2006-11-25 00:00:00 | by Desolate_beauty | [ Reply to This ]



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