|
|
Hear a word draw a sound. See a picture that's profound. Think on colors, dream on clouds. Touch the skies, it never dies. Catch a flower or a rose. It doesn't matter; let's suppose. Grab the paper and some pens. Write all over just have fun. It doesn't need to rhyme. Or make sense. |
I wonder whats become of you...| Posted on 2007-03-07 00:00:00 | by Yariel Alvarado | [ Reply to This ] | I like what you've done with the rhyme scheme here, where you've changed from the first stanza to the second, then gone back to the first, then completely abandoned it at the end. I think this makes the message that much more powerful. I like the first two stanzas best, well the first half of the second one, but I think that is just because I am more traditional and I like rhyme, but that is just me. Overall, good write. | | Posted on 2007-02-19 00:00:00 | by jennah | [ Reply to This ] | Love it.really cute.very concise and we can all totally relate to it.bravo! | | Posted on 2007-02-06 00:00:00 | by EsCaPisT | [ Reply to This ] | this is an ok write flowed well I guess you can write an poem on how to write an poem funny huh good job, ty | | Posted on 2006-12-25 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ] | this is great | | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by POETIC-PRINCESS | [ Reply to This ] | Fantastic! I especially love the last stanza. | | Posted on 2006-11-25 00:00:00 | by Danae | [ Reply to This ] | Never thought of it that way before but it makes since!!! great write . | Kelley Frost | Posted on 2006-12-07 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ] | Haha nice. Its so cheery, it makes me happy. Yay I am going to grab some pens! Or rather open up a word document..haha. | -Randee | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by UnderlinedInRed | [ Reply to This ] | |