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    dots Submission Name: With Youdots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 493
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 991



    Description:
       This Is Written For My Ex Bf
    Ill Love You Foreva And Alwaiiz No Matta Wat Happens


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    dotsWith Youdots
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    There isnt anything
    I wouldnt do
    Just to be happy
    And be with you

    You make my life
    Worth living for
    Its being without you
    That I cant stand anymore

    You are always in my thoughts
    My mind my dreams
    You have made me see
    That life is not as bad as it seems

    I want to be with you
    More than you know
    Always and forever
    Watch our love grow

    Promise me now
    That you will never leave
    And Ill show you love
    That you have never seen

    I could neva hurt you
    In any way
    From now till the end
    I want you in my life to stay

    You have had my heart
    From the day the we met
    For this I have to thank god
    And of course the internet

    Now I leave this with you
    To read and decide
    If you are ready to forget your past
    And the tears that uve cried




    Submitted on 2006-11-26 00:16:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It's soo cute. :D
    | Posted on 2006-12-14 00:00:00 | by Czarina Words | [ Reply to This ]
      That is so sweet. I like this. I like the idea of the opption at the end. it turns the table for the other person to make a discission. it really puts the ball in there court. way to go!
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by Desolate_beauty | [ Reply to This ]
      sounds deep I like it I read it keep writting feelings that touch others, ty
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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