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    Author: crazy_83
    ASL Info:    28/f/mo
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 27/29/18
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 583
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    no more cryin
    no more liein
    when i leave this world
    i will be smilin

    sex on the beach
    or just sittin in the sand
    all i know is
    dont make life bland

    live it up
    while you got the chance
    take a leap
    dance the dance

    dont wait to be seen
    let yourself be known
    dont take things for granted
    dont die alone

    dont let people get to you
    dont let it bring you down
    make your life your world
    let love surround







    Submitted on 2006-11-26 03:22:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hey thats preatty good I got into it I like it, ty
    | Posted on 2006-12-06 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]
      Exactly my philsophy in life. Nice sweet and straight to the point. Good work. Keep it up!

    -Randee
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by UnderlinedInRed | [ Reply to This ]


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