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    dots Submission Name: let me godots
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    Author: crazy_83
    ASL Info:    28/f/mo
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 27/29/18
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 618
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    Bytes: 325



    Description:
       I recently broke up with my boyfriend for the fifth time in over 2 years. I have done to many bad things to him yet he still wants to be with me. So for his own good i just want him to let me go.


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    dotslet me godots
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    please let me go
    stop holding on
    i need freedom

    no more sacrifice
    no more time
    turn your head

    my mind is closed
    my heart is ice
    dont say a word

    take your love
    you deserve more


    please forget me





    Submitted on 2006-11-26 05:23:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is really good. and i think its good that you dont want to hurt your ex you just want the two of you to move on. joanna
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]
      wow that really seems like something my ex would say to me, cool writting I know what you mean, ty
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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