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    dots Submission Name: make it throughdots
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    Author: kapri49
    ASL Info:    16/f/canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 31/69/30
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 782
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 513



    Description:
       about me and my sort of EX boyfriend


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    Beaten,Bruised,and Broken
    That's how our hearts feel
    Slow and Mournful Rythym
    Thats how our hearts beat
    We have done this to eachother
    We know it's our own fault
    Our Fear, Anger, and Insecurities
    Tore our love apart
    But our Hope, our Soul, and Destiney
    Brang us back together
    Our love may fall
    And we may hurt
    But together we'll make it through
    Yesterday,Today, and Tomorrow
    And everyday that follows




    Submitted on 2006-11-26 07:49:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i like this piece. i love the message in it that the love of you two can last through anything even your own inflictions. good write keep it up. joanna
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this writting I feel the same way its cool how you used your words how they are put together, Liked your stuff keep it up I enjoyed reading it, ty
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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