I note that you wrote this one some time ago and hope you've stepped away sufficiently now to feel a lot better. Poetry certainly is a good way to get rid of pent-up frustration! I wrote a poem yesterday called "Moving On" that's sort of the upside of getting away from such feelings. Take care, Sharon
Whew, you must've needed that. There was alot of anger in this piece and I'm glad you are able to release it through your poetry. Even with the fustratrating emotions you must have been feeling, you were still able to write it in couplets. Kudos for that. I think that's all the thought I can provide. However, one last thing. It doesn't really feel complete. At least, not to me. There is no sense of an ending?