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    dots Submission Name: I Hate My Lovedots
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    Author: bloodyalexander
    ASL Info:    17FSeattle
    Elite Ratio:    1.03 - 11/12/6
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 113
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 938



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       I was bored and didn't know what to do with myself.......true story......


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    dotsI Hate My Lovedots
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    After that sudden brawl
    I thought you'd never see me fall
    Weeping thoughts of only you
    I thought the lies would finally shine through
    Our differences must finaly come to past
    Fore my love for you would never end so fast
    When I told you I was o.k
    You never shrugged and walked away
    You stood your ground and looked at me firm
    You said your love wasn't something I've earned
    You said I have your heart for now and forever more
    Now you ask me why I'm crying
    And you say you'll always be right beside me
    And that nothing can seperate us
    You said you hate to see me sad
    And you said with every tear your dieing
    And now I see the proof
    For one single rosey red tear
    Fell silently and made it clear
    That fight was one of many
    For soon you'll only be mine....





    Submitted on 2006-11-26 11:00:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i like this poem alot, i can kinda relate.
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by koolness | [ Reply to This ]
      Pretty good, but you spelled some words wrong. I like the message.
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by Two Meters Away | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a cool poem. good job. joanna
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]
      I love the mood of this poem. It IS kewl!
    I wanna read more
    Keep writeing hun,
    Jenny
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by Darklonelygirl | [ Reply to This ]
      I dunno......Kewl i guess?
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by bloodyalexander | [ Reply to This ]



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