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Who am I?


Author: darkwiccan14
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No one is the same! -TRU THAT- someone tried to tell me who to be, they can't change me! -lol-


Who am I?



Who am I 1you ask?
Well...I am...

Quick as a cat,
Clever as a fox,
never to once look back,
and find out you're lost.

Enchanted as a wizard,
Camoflauged as a lizard,
never the one running with scissors,
and to be caught in a blizzard.

I am different,
I am strange,
It is what makes me unique,
But hey no one's the same!

Everyone's different,
and that's fine with me,
don't follow anyone else,
and create your own individualality.




Submitted on 2006-11-26 11:51:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Ha, cute this! Nice flow, rhyme, and meter! You have a developing talent that is delightful, Alexis!
| Posted on 2006-12-09 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  Great poem. Sends out a great mesage to anyone who reads it, and thats one of the great things of poetry.
"Everyone's different,
and that's fine with me,
don't follow anyone else,
and create your own individualality."
perfect~something I would change is the first line~think you threw a one in there by mistake
overall pretty good keep it up :) T




| Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by DesecratedDream | [ Reply to This ]


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