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    dots Submission Name: Dear Photographdots
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    Author: Jason_Clement
    ASL Info:    17, male
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 147/149/61
    Words: 204
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 179
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsDear Photographdots
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    Dear Photograph
    by Jason C. Clement
    © Jason C. Clement

    Hello dear photograph,
    I know you cannot hear my words;
    Nothing's going to change your apathy
    We're both in seperate worlds.
    It's been so long since then,
    The days where nothing mattered;
    When I had a home to turn to,
    A sanctity, where dreams weren't shattered.

    But I'll keep carrying on for you,
    Sweet memories;
    Of a child burned by yesterday,
    Could you take my pain away?

    Time has passed me by
    Without a thought or reason;
    Self-centered and egotistical
    Time's plotted out in treason.
    And now all that I have,
    Are photographs unwilling to speak;
    So silently I, slip away,
    Praying that I wasn't as weak.

    But I'll keep carrying on for you,
    Sweet memories;
    Of a child burned by yesterday,
    Could you take my pain away?

    Plagued by bleak belligerence,
    Cold time embraces me whole;
    I hear death plead his innoscence,
    I know now, I'm on my own.

    Dear photograph;
    Why did I lose track?
    Dear photograph;
    Why can't I go back?
    Dear photograph;
    Why do you haunt my mind?
    Dear photograph;
    When did I go blind?








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      wow.
    what a great poem!!
    i love it!


    :)
    and yes i am back

    i love how you made me feel like i was really looking at a certian picture. it was wonderful!
    yay
    | Posted on 2007-10-23 00:00:00 | by annie smith | [ Reply to This ]
      Jason
    I dont know how I missed this one for so long
    I couldnt agree with you more with this write
    This is so true
    Often in fact very often I look to the photographs of my youth and I am notm ashamed to admit a lot of times I cry
    So many memories come in to play staring at those photogrphs and how I wish I could return to the days were innocense ruled my mind
    To this day I am always told GROW UP but honestly I dont think I ever will
    EXCELLENT WRITE JASON!!!
    But Honestly every single write of yours always impresses me
    You have such incredible natural talent
    God Bless
    Your Friend
    Ron Ramonas
    | Posted on 2007-09-10 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey jase, it's been far too long; how've you been? this was so beautiful, i always did enjoy your imagry....i know this goes deeper than surface level; but on a surface level let me say that photos freak me out, you could look at one forever and still not chance an honest guess on what the person in the photograph was actually feeling..thinking..it's almost like it's not real, and if that photograph weren't there to connect it; the memory would have been forgotten with millions of others. to your write though;
    I liked it a lot, it kept my attention and had a gentle, sorrowful voice to it...almost like the character was just ready to give up. after all, at some point we realize all we have are memories and rhetorical questions, and just how sad is *that*? memories seem such a curse sometimes and yet would we really live 'in the moment' if we didn't have them? it's hard to let what's in the past stay there....because so much of it helps define your perspective. the last line seemed to sort of drop off and wasn't as climatic as i was expecting; however real life isn't always dramatic either, so it didn't bug me too much.
    ~jess~
    | Posted on 2006-12-23 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
      this is beautiful i really like it =]
    rachelle
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by dark lover | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it alot, but some of the lines didnt seem to fit. i really liked it tho. my favorite stanza is the last, i like the flow of it and the repetivness of it. koodoes for you
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by Adden Lee | [ Reply to This ]
      ..I...I...

    My feelings I cannot explain, as always your silence and mystery unravil and feed my soul, I love you Jason..forever...and forever more...



    Jason, on a more serious manner, you know I've always enjoyed your poems...and it's a good thing you never stopped writing, you just kept on advancing..thinking back on the first poems that I read from you, it was back a year or two..you've gone very far my friend.....and I am proud of you, and all that's left is some time, and patience...I see your effort, it's just a matter of time before your freams come true...and hopefully I'll be there by your side to celebrate with you...and quit looking at that photograph, because the past is the past, and the future has yet to begin...it's time to make it baby
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by Kkatz | [ Reply to This ]



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