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    dots Submission Name: False...dots
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    Author: ShadowHarlequin
    ASL Info:    17/m/Etheral plane
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 22/31/14
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 389
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 753



    Description:
       It's not really you, yet no one sees that, no one is there to support you...

    There is always someone there...



    I wrote this about a freind who can strongly relate to this. That person liked it alot so I hope you do too.


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    dotsFalse...dots
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    Another day,
    Another lie,
    A life you're not realy living.
    A false smile,
    Happiness for a while,
    Those twisted bastards jeering.
    Their stupid taunts,
    Your soul they haunt,
    A nightmare all engulfing.
    Deep they cut,
    They call you "Slut!",
    The pain inside is burning.
    Retreat inside,
    There you hide,
    Your thoughts slowly churning.
    On your life,
    Full of strife,
    You look away, your back turning.
    The blade of steel,
    Oh so real,
    Gives your wrist the kiss.
    Blood flows free,
    So silently,
    Loose your-self in bliss.
    Hide again,
    From the pain,
    Another day you miss.




    Submitted on 2004-01-29 04:43:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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