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    dots Submission Name: The pain will never go awaydots
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    Author: Darklonelygirl
    ASL Info:    16/f/va
    Elite Ratio:    1.87 - 148/90/61
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 106
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 598



    Description:
       This is about child abuse relates to 'The Little Girl Named Kayla'


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    dotsThe pain will never go awaydots
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    The pain will never go away
    The wound will never heal.
    The evil that was done to me
    Is now my eyes, my heart.
    The black will never turn to gray
    The blood will not congeal.
    The violence is never through
    The past does not depart.

    Time will merely make me whole,
    Consuming what I am
    Part sufferer, part comforter,
    Part victim, part tomorrow

    Part daughter of an angry soul,
    Part child of despair,
    Part witness and part conqueror
    Of all that did me wrong.






    Submitted on 2006-11-26 14:48:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      
    In the name of love.
    We rejoice,celebrate,give thanks.

    In the name of love.
    We hurt, cry out in pain,will never be the same.

    We pour out are complete being.Spreading whats let of it across many pages.Others passing by can see the bits and pieces that remain.

    Good job on the write.
    | Posted on 2006-12-04 00:00:00 | by Postillion | [ Reply to This ]
      again...this is very sad...but you convey your feelings very well in this poem
    | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by iKnowWhoIAmNow | [ Reply to This ]


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