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    dots Submission Name: Lustdots
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    Author: Darklonelygirl
    ASL Info:    16/f/va
    Elite Ratio:    1.87 - 148/90/61
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 88
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 551



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    Lust
    Such a dirty word,
    but yet that's all we are and ever will be.
    We need each other because of this.
    We both need to be desired.
    We both need to feel each other's warm breath on our skin.
    We both need to feel the hot estacy that longs in our souls.
    We both need to be embaced by each other's quickened heartbeats.
    We both need the temperarly love that we feel for each other in that moment.
    No we do not love each other, it is just that dirty selfish lust that we crave.




    Submitted on 2006-11-26 16:16:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I love the way that you capture hard realities in your work...I'm sure that you could get anyone to understand the things you write about without ever having gone through them because you are so great at getting the emotions behind the actions across
    | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by iKnowWhoIAmNow | [ Reply to This ]
      Good write... I find it a lil hard to write about lust... So I think.... But. good write..
    lizzie
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by babygirl09 | [ Reply to This ]
      I could never write about lust good for you , Good job keep up the great work, ty
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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