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    dots Submission Name: Wrap Me Updots
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    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 589
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 693



    Description:
       Haww, lovely feelings... Hope this is ok.. Let me know what you think.


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    dotsWrap Me Updots
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    Whispered words of sweet adoration,
    Light kisses upon my cheek.
    Your skin on mine, a wondrous sensation,
    Your voice makes my knees go weak.

    A thought of you to forever please,
    Dreams become desired over reality.
    My guard let down, emotions released.
    I'm over my doubts and self pity.

    You've revived what I've lost,
    Haunting memories no longer terrorize,
    Breathing no longer exhausts.
    Small beauties in life mesmerize.

    Wrap me up in your loving arms
    Take me away, abduct my soul,
    Keep my fragile heart from harm,
    Remind me what it means to be whole.




    Submitted on 2006-11-26 16:25:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this poem. Finally, a poem that doesn't make me sad! I love it. Very refreshing and grand. I like the flow and rythm. Very nice :)


    Ciao,

    }i{Renae}i{
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by Poetic_tragedy6 | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this its really nice and refreshing. I like your outlook on love. I think its hopeful.

    Love & Light,
    Jay.
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]


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