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    dots Submission Name: Your violent lovedots
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    Author: Darklonelygirl
    ASL Info:    16/f/va
    Elite Ratio:    1.87 - 148/90/61
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 92
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 935



    Description:
       I used to be in a violent relationship and I was able to get out before it reached this level.


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    dotsYour violent lovedots
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    Go ahead push me down, hit me again!
    I'm used to it now.
    Go ahead leave bruises and say your sorry.
    I'll just hide them and put on a smile.
    Go ahead take it all out on me.
    I'll won't understand your violent love, but I'll still give you my all.
    Go ahead break my sprit, crush my soul.
    I'll just cry myself to sleep after your done.
    Go ahead call me a worthless bitch and tell me I'm ugly.
    I'll tell myself you don't mean it and that you really do love me.
    Go ahead beat the shit out of me!
    I won't fight back, I won't agrue, I won't try to run, I won't tell anyone, I'll just put more makeup on.
    Go ahead point the gun at me and shoot.
    I'll still won't understand why your this way when I'm dead, but I'll always love your violent love.





    Submitted on 2006-11-26 16:39:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Whoa hey I can relate to what your saying it reminds me of my self and how i used to be it seems like that would really be something my ex would say to me, Good job ty
    | Posted on 2006-12-06 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a good peom i can really relate though to me it doesn't seem like a poem to me it seems more of a letter or something u would scream but thats jjust me
    though there are many variations of poems

    though it radiates strength which is truely beautiful

    i hope that you are now safe and no longer are being hurt nor on the brink of being hurt ^_^

    ^_^ <3
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by Andreeya_Xsis | [ Reply to This ]
      I to was in a violet one myself. I got out of it and he realized what he lost. He never hit me and I won't let myself get into that place again and it never reached the level this poem is. I am better then that and I am glad you got out.

    Take care and congrates on getting out!
    Michelle
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by Desolate_beauty | [ Reply to This ]



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