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    dots Submission Name: My name is depressiondots
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    Author: Darklonelygirl
    ASL Info:    16/f/va
    Elite Ratio:    1.87 - 148/90/61
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 104
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 845



    Description:
       This is how depression is and how it effected my life.


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    dotsMy name is depressiondots
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    Hello pretty girl
    I've been waiting for you to become vulnerable.
    See your boyfriend just left you so now your all mine.
    My job is to make your life miserable
    I'll make you feel unwanted and worthless.
    I'll make you distant yourself from everyone you love.
    I'll make you a outcast differant from all the rest.
    I'll make you hate things you used to love.
    I'll make you feel stupid and innorent.
    I'll make you feel fat and ugly.
    I'll make you wanna die.
    Oh yes you can try to get rid of me.
    Go ahead take the drugs.
    Go ahead cut yourself ,but make sure the cut is real deep,
    Because you'll never be able to escape me.
    I am everywhere you go.
    I am everything you do.
    I am Depression.




    Submitted on 2006-11-26 20:54:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      yeah everyone gets alittle depressed now and then I do Im happy cause I have this girl for me
    But when shes not around it gets alittle boring
    Sometimes in the day I feel like that but to long
    ok writtng ty
    | Posted on 2006-12-06 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like the way you wrote this, from the perspective of the problem...it kinda reminds me of my poem, It is I, Your Best Friend Mia
    | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by iKnowWhoIAmNow | [ Reply to This ]
      WOW
    | Posted on 2006-11-28 00:00:00 | by AngelinDisguise | [ Reply to This ]


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