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    dots Submission Name: sometimesdots
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    Author: ton321
    Elite Ratio:    0.23 - 0/1/2
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotssometimesdots
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    sometimes the suns too hot
    and the moons too cold;

    The voices on the street are harsh
    to the untrained ear, their syllables
    are sounds that wash accross
    an empty pier.

    but the beauty of your memory
    is like the thaw in spring,
    my heart begins to soften
    to your everything




    Submitted on 2006-11-26 21:33:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Admitedly this is very short but has a very pleasant sound, with some really fine rhyme that fits in wonderfully well with the poem, over all very effective and quite well down, worthy of bravos...bravo...bravo...bravo...
    | Posted on 2006-11-28 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]



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