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    dots Submission Name: Words Beyond The Mirrordots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       Just gazed at myself and this is what I envisioned through a mirror.

    And Ani, I'm not depressed, it's just things that I picture when I stare at a mirror and talk to myself...!!! I miss you though!


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    dotsWords Beyond The Mirrordots
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    I can see a gloomy moonlight,
    Just as the day gives birth to the night,
    And the reflection in sight,
    Is a world beyond imagined,
    I see a bird with no wings,
    Signifying that people are dying,
    Teardrops from the hurt keep falling,
    And eyes that reflect hate and lust;
    Have stopped crying.

    I say words of wisdom,
    Whenever meditating,
    Though some things remain unsaid,
    Things are starting to look clearer,
    And the feeling of loneliness inside my head,
    Only makes some words expand;
    Beyond the mirror.







    Submitted on 2006-11-26 22:01:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i came on this page again and realized that you should correct the word "maditating" into "meditating"..
    | Posted on 2007-01-29 00:00:00 | by Ani | [ Reply to This ]
      forgot to say...i love the poem, your poems reminds me of tupac ha!
    | Posted on 2006-11-27 00:00:00 | by Ani | [ Reply to This ]
      lol sureeeeeee..you and i know your depressed, its ok to be depressed..i just dont want you to be cuz your too innocent to be in those dark reflections and make you who you are -stay up and dont change

    you miss me? you saw me 2 days ago lol
    | Posted on 2006-11-27 00:00:00 | by Ani | [ Reply to This ]


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