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As A Ghost


Author: mrmundane
ASL Info:    20/m/vancouver bc
Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 47 /96 /78
Words: 174
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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As A Ghost



gone ghost arise
the future is obsolete
the money that ails
is the cage you must deceit

in crowds i lose you
in casualty streets
and patterns form in faces
whom pass me in defeat

systematic drownings
of this, we all detect
and all of this we feel the need
the need we have to defect

when mornings i awake in panic
i should have realised the means
behind these static interludes
which are the results of media things

the bill i spent is coming back
stop worrying me, to cave me at that
yosemite will never fall
like him, i believe myself immortal

come back tomorrow i will feel no pain
a changed derivative no longer insane
over thoughts manifesting as a friend...
to fool my psyche -- to over extend

and so i shall become -- as a ghost
passing through this land of the ghosts
only i am the one in perfect clarity
and they are the ones who pass through my hard earned tangibility.




Submitted on 2006-11-27 06:19:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  gone ghost arise
the future is obsolete
the money that ails
is the cage you must deceit

in crowds i lose you
in casualty streets
and patterns form in faces
whom pass me in defeat

Was my favorite part. But the entire thing was really good. I have no really advice to give on this one, its almost perfect as it is!
Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
~David~
| Posted on 2006-11-27 00:00:00 | by D.C.M. | [ Reply to This ]


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