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    dots Submission Name: harddots
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    Author: Thief
    ASL Info:    22/male/plainview
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 180/80/69
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       i messed around with a girl and i think i fell in love again....


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    i got to know her in one night
    and the voices in my hesd go crazy
    i cant stop thinking about her
    and i dont know why
    i can still feel her soft hands holding mine
    even if it was to keep me from tickling
    i still hear her laughing
    and i think, how does she sound screaming?
    her short hair
    with a silky feel to it
    her finger fliping me off
    makin me think about her clit
    will i show her this "poem"?
    or will i keep this one bottled up as well
    an old feeling in my heart rises stronger than
    ever
    hard...is how i fell(deep in love again)




    Submitted on 2006-11-27 14:08:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice. xD
    | Posted on 2011-01-21 00:00:00 | by ShadowsnLights | [ Reply to This ]
      Huh....that really makes me wonder about all the guys that I've flipped off in my lifetime! I'm trying to figure out how in the world you associate flipping you off with the wonders of a woman's fun parts- lol, I guess to each his own. Either way all I can say is, be careful with your heart, it's the only one that you've got. Good luck with your girl situation.

    Candi
    | Posted on 2006-12-14 00:00:00 | by dreamweaver | [ Reply to This ]
      My only advice brotha is if you do show her this piece, make sure you know that she is really cool with you. I only say that because of the cllit part ya know? Some chicks might trip out on that unless they are for sure interested in you as well. Hope it works out for you man. Go get her!

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    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by fryte | [ Reply to This ]
      ..I so read this today,
    Love, Obsession>....can't just get away from those two, yea, me neither...
    hopefully, you get what you want at the cememtary
    | Posted on 2006-11-27 00:00:00 | by rAbit | [ Reply to This ]


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