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    dots Submission Name: since the day i became differentdots
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    Author: supergirl_in_oh
    Elite Ratio:    1.67 - 29/122/52
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
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       about my life


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    dotssince the day i became differentdots
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    I was stupid to think my happiness would last
    Then it was shattered the day I became an outcast
    I tried to tell my "friends"
    I tried to give them a hint
    But they haven't talked to me
    Since the day I became different
    One day it seemed like everything was good
    Then it felt like no-one understood
    People make fun of what they can't see
    But they have to push past my appearance
    And try to see me
    I feel like the reason no-one is there
    I just want someone to listen, someone to care
    All I want is for someone to hold my hand
    And tell me that it's ok,
    That they understand




    Submitted on 2006-11-27 19:43:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You already have someone like that, don't be blind, open your eyes...even if one is literally blind, it never hurts to try to see.
    I do understand how you feel here, but I think you were too up-front. Personally I believe there is no such thing as different and no such thing as normal...we just make it that way our selves by our own standards and by what others say...so really it doesn't even matter.
    I also didn't care too much for the "cut my wrists because no one understands me feel" here...it just was too angsty and it didn't go well with me. I do think this has potential and it needs to be improved.

    *tox*
    | Posted on 2006-11-29 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]
      i know how you feel. that happened to me. it sucks. people can relate to this really well. good job. keep writing.

    ~!rocker5871!~
    | Posted on 2006-11-28 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 | [ Reply to This ]



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