Her Twisted Heart by LadyMustang

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Author:	LadyMustang
ASL Info:	42, female, West Virginia
Elite Ratio:	4.19 - 222/171/71
Words:	159

Class/Type:	Poetry/Dark
Total Views:	133
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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Her Twisted Heart dots

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Her Twisted Heart

It's mystical as the mist falls upon this
night, My heart is filled with a deep
pain that grips my soul so tight.

This heart has become so numb to
these feelings inside, I've gotten
really good at keeping them buried
where noone knows they hide.

To look through my eyes no soul
could you see, Just many masks
of what the pieces of my heart
once use to be.

In the silence of this darkness is
where my tears always run blood
red, As thoughts of death spin
around inside my head.

This woman once had a spirit filled
with a loving light gleaming, Her mind
filled with thoughts of the future she
must have been dreaming.

To many times she has trusted in love
but just gets burned, no more can her
twisted heart be turned.

Written By: Wilma S. Hill
copyright©November23,2006

Submitted on 2006-11-27 22:49:50 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Beautifullly done sis, you're very pure in your writing....pure because you've felt what it's like to not even be able to pure if you want to. Love....well it depends how many times you've been hurt, how deep that runs....i figured i wouldn't care about anyone again, and i did stop for so very long, almost long enough to let go of life itself just to make sure that i didn't care again- because that would mean getting hurt...but you already know my story right? i do sincerely believe that someone can make all that pain worth it for you but hun,( i'm almost begging you because i know how it can be....)you have to LET them. as for the write itself, nice emotion, fair format, i don't have too much to improve upon so nice job :) another faves add, keep writing <3
-jessie-
| Posted on 2006-12-16 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a lovely and sad poem. Nicely written and expressed and tells such sad story of love that hurts. It is often we tend to trust people who probably shouldnt be trusted and when it comes to matters of the heart, the results are devestating. It does indeed turn a once warm and loving person into a cold and distant stranger, even to themselves. It is a huge risk to love someone as you basically put your well being into the hands of another. Sometimes it is wonderful but sometimes it is devestating. Another good poem by you. Nice work.

Lorna
| Posted on 2006-12-06 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
  Love! It first wounds us, then saves us, then if we're not careful, wounds us again! You write beautifully, Wilma!
| Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  that was a really nice piece I really enjoyed I really can't critique bc it was extremely well writen but what about that copy write? how did you get that? I need to get that so please hit me up at biggirlbigworld2@aol.com with the details.
| Posted on 2006-11-29 00:00:00 | by L.L.COLLINS | [ Reply to This ]

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