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    dots Submission Name: Back in TImedots
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    Author: †Condemned†
    ASL Info:    19/F/Your Backyard
    Elite Ratio:    2.61 - 7/4/3
    Words: 186
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 86
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 997



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       Just something I wrote about no one in particular. Came to mind from no where really.


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    You had loved me so much back then,
    And treated me with respect,
    You gave me what I needed,
    And was never one to neglect,

    You were so dark and so sexy,
    Your smile and those eyes,
    To the curve of your hips,
    And down those lean thighs,

    If I got a chance to relive those moments,
    To be with you just one more time,
    I’d cherish our love then and even now,
    To know that you were once mine,

    Snapping out of my distant fantasy,
    Back into my harsh reality,
    Knowing you‘re not my company,
    Throws me into a state of insanity,

    So I live without you now,
    Still seems too unreal to be true,
    Watching you walk down the street,
    Wishing I were next to you,

    How I long to go back in time,
    To grasp the way it used to be,
    Watching our love that once was,
    Only to see you walk away from me...




    Submitted on 2006-11-27 23:05:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i liked this. it flowed really well and held my attention. back in time. if only, if only...

    i tip my hat and bid thee farewell.
    | Posted on 2006-11-28 00:00:00 | by PoeticNonsense | [ Reply to This ]



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