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I'll always

Author: sweetme16
ASL Info:    21/f/who cares
Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 108 /252 /162
Words: 57
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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loving someone who doesn't love you hurts

I'll always

I’ll always be here for you
Never leave you to find your battle’s alone
I’ll always love you
Never let you feel unloved
I’ll always support you
Never let you give up
I’ll always be watching over you
Never let you make stupid mistakes
Like loving someone who loves someone else
And will never love you

Submitted on 2006-11-28 13:58:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Sad, but very well written. And yes, you are right. Giving a love that does not return, is very hard to bear.

Excellent write.

| Posted on 2006-11-28 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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