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    dots Submission Name: Throwing up my emotionsdots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 602
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       A poem about bulimia....


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    dotsThrowing up my emotionsdots
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    Pain in my stomach
    To replace the pain in my heart
    I think something is wrong
    I can't remember the start
    I find myself staring into the water
    Throwing up my pain
    Wanting to sleep forever
    And never wake again
    I eat and eat
    Not wanting to swallow
    My pain so real
    my soul is so hollow
    Throwin up my life
    Trying to not look
    Into my friends eyes
    Cuz everytime I go
    They ask if I did
    It just hurts to live
    A vicious cycle
    Of pain and food
    Hating my life
    Never feeling good
    I puke and puke
    To forget the mistakes
    I want to be thin
    I'll do whatever it takes....





    Submitted on 2006-11-28 16:18:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hey babe I want you to know I am here if you ever need to talk. I like this poem. The next time you feel like you want to and tell me so I can stop you. You are my best friend. If you go away what is there left to live for. LIfe suck trust me I know. Wanting to be loved by someone and never getting it. You can't really get rid of your pain this way it will come back. The only reason I am not anorexic right now is because of you. I know how you feel right down to the last little pice. You don't even have to tell me just look at me. Talk to me when you feel like this. I will be your listener. I love you!! I love you!! You keep me me and I am to do the same. I F.L.Y!! Don't ever ever forget that!!

    Kelsey ( Anorexic beginer ) Keep me safe and I will leave the light on for you to find your way home.
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by bleeding_sin | [ Reply to This ]
      Sounds like you have you own problems, over all
    it was good to me I liked it tells me alot about you, Me too I sleep alday never feel like getting up, well I gave an comment on this cool writting keep it up, always ty
    | Posted on 2006-11-29 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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