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    dots Submission Name: Downeydots
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    Author: usglen
    ASL Info:    60-Male-Garden Grove,CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.12 - 59/71/44
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 573
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    Description:
       This is an acrostic poem that I wrote early this month. I hope that my readers will enjoy it.


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    dotsDowneydots
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    Downey


    Delightful town
    Often I would leave
    Where a lot of things happen
    Nightly Id go out
    Everyday Id do something
    Young I was when I lived there





    Submitted on 2006-11-28 16:25:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Is Downey like your hometown? and this is talking about when you lived there?

    Hopefully not clueless,
    Lia
    | Posted on 2006-12-05 00:00:00 | by Glassy Eyed | [ Reply to This ]


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