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Downey


Author: usglen
ASL Info:    60-Male-Garden Grove,CA
Elite Ratio:    3.12 - 59 /71 /44
Words: 32
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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This is an acrostic poem that I wrote early this month. I hope that my readers will enjoy it.


Downey


Downey


Delightful town
Often I would leave
Where a lot of things happen
Nightly I’d go out
Everyday I’d do something
Young I was when I lived there





Submitted on 2006-11-28 16:25:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Is Downey like your hometown? and this is talking about when you lived there?

Hopefully not clueless,
Lia
| Posted on 2006-12-05 00:00:00 | by Glassy Eyed | [ Reply to This ]


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