The mind works in wonderful ways with no sleep, doesnt it? Lol Very nice I like 5th line down you spelled eternal wrong (sorry im the [censored] for grammar lol) Lil confused~is this about the times changing or was there a passing this wknd? Dont know cause I kinda got both out of this. Good job luv. :)
Ok, This is Good, but I got alittle lost in the first line....maybe t'is just me, or i dunno. "The lunacy the brain contrives", between lunacy and the, is there supposed to be an "of" ...the cycle of life, writting in such a simple form. Contrasting from morning to dark....from being born...to dying. ah...can't live without the other...or just invetiable. thanks..for reading my stuff also.