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    dots Submission Name: Heartbeat and A Dying Minddots
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    Author: Aken Sol
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    Words: 142
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    dotsHeartbeat and A Dying Minddots
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    "Will you wait for me?"

    A wind tunnel laced with black-tipped rose petals
    strikes me and snatches the air from my lungs.
    I would wait until time corodes my body whole.

    "I might fade away by then."

    The neon handwriting on the wall flutters away
    before I could finish reading it.
    I could only see the beginning and end.

    "You won't."

    She says it with such confidence.
    A goddess.
    A saint.
    A prophet.
    A liar.

    "I just am!"

    Weave words that comfort me.
    Cover me in that plastic warmth.

    "No, you're not."

    Air blades rip off that blanket of lies from me
    and I'm blown away to nothingness.

    "Will you remember me?"

    A single petal flutters down before my eyes
    and I'm left with nothing else to say but...

    "...no."




    Submitted on 2006-11-28 20:03:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, this is excellent. A bit confusing the first time around, and chock full of deep meanings. Is it about death? Death of someone who is talking to his love before he dies?
    | Posted on 2006-11-28 00:00:00 | by Aurora-Borealis | [ Reply to This ]


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