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Author: Black-Death
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Look lsn to my voice... its time for me to make some noice... MOVE... and just move... just move... can you hear me... lsn to my voice it was never my choice... this is my home. BACK Up... youv never bin in this place... iv caled my home... so just MOVE.... and show me what you can do... in my place... i called home.... so just MOVE and show me what you can do.... MOVE.....

Submitted on 2006-11-28 21:39:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| Posted on 2006-11-29 00:00:00 | by AngelinDisguise | [ Reply to This ]

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