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Author: lah
ASL Info:    20/F/Thousand oaks
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I wrote this when i was 12


I can't be the image of a morning sun looking down on the hurting souls of the world,
for i know that they have felt a love, a loss, a fury, and a loneliness.
If they have not I feel for their unknowledgeable miss of compassion and caring.
For what is a life without feeling.
A life without a scar or bleeding, A life without a smile or snicker.
I tell you its no life at all.
What would you do without your sorrow, your flaw or even your simple issue.
You couldn't, happiness is a key but where would we be if the only thing we felt was a joy.
You think its a great idea but there would be no compassion without suffering.
No love without a loss and No true Happiness without sadness.
So the next time you feel you could brake. The next time you feel you a shake and take away the life even with simple knife or blow.
Life is a gift a gift of feeling and if you did not wish to feel no more, Then lifes gift too you of being able to live should not waist its time or even have given life to you had it known your soul did not take life and live.

Submitted on 2006-11-28 22:43:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  thats some deep stuff to be writing at 12, wow though i liked it
| Posted on 2006-11-28 00:00:00 | by Kasper187 | [ Reply to This ]

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