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My love was deep My love was strong But now my love is to far gone To save you from this painful fate I'll sit back and hate you for everything you didn't keep to me I'm paying you back Can't you see You broke my heart It's time to pay You know death never comes to play So take watch on the next full moon For that's when death will come for you |
1st...My comment on your"Mood: Confused" I never give advise and never will.But I do give my opinon as food for thought. Becareful with what others say. It dosen't hurt to take it all in. But your choice in matters are yours and not others. You have alot of life left to live. Each day will brings something new to learn. This little word we use called love.Is miss used by many and miss undestood by more(such as your boyfriend). 2nd...Your poem Rhyme,Rhythm and follow is good. As well as content. Emotion can be felt in your words. Poetry from the heart. Good job Good luck with your walk in this life and keep your eyes open to the lessons it brings. Postillion | Posted on 2007-01-02 00:00:00 | by Postillion | [ Reply to This ] | wow..i felt the pain in that..im so sorry | | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by TeenaSuicide | [ Reply to This ] | |