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    dots Submission Name: No More Sensesdots
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    Author: Martha McEntire
    ASL Info:    34/f/Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 27/25/22
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
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    dotsNo More Sensesdots
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    No more Senses
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    I don't want to feel anymore
    tired of all the pain and despair.
    I don't want to see anymore
    sick of all the hate and death.
    I don't want to breathe anymore
    suffocated by what smells like hell.
    What has happened to this world and
    all the people in it?







    Submitted on 2006-11-29 16:21:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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