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    dots Submission Name: Time is to Shortdots
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    Author: Martha McEntire
    ASL Info:    34/f/Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 27/25/22
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 557
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 500



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    dotsTime is to Shortdots
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    today tears of sadness and pain
    fall from me,
    but tomorrow tears of joy and happiness
    for i know that you will be in heaven,
    and no more pain or sorrow will there be.
    He gave you to us and you are our gift,
    but now He will take you back and your
    heart he shall lift.
    time is to short
    so spend it well
    for when He may take you
    no one can tell.

    Dedicated to a Saint that will be taken way to soon!!!




    Submitted on 2006-11-29 16:22:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow.Death on a lighter note.Realization and tihs would of been one of the most deprseeing things just by tpoic but you turn that into something with question and a brighter side.Nice
    | Posted on 2006-11-29 00:00:00 | by every48seconds | [ Reply to This ]


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