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    dots Submission Name: Timedots
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    Author: Martha McEntire
    ASL Info:    34/f/Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 27/25/22
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
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    dotsTimedots
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    There once was a time in my life
    when all seemed right.
    A time when I saw the rainbows
    with all their colors.
    I could feel faith in all that I did
    no pressure to find it.
    A time when it took no effort
    to put a smile on my face.
    It just happened
    like it was natural, a part of life.
    There was a time when
    you were the one that brought all this to life.
    How ironic that with time
    you took it all away.
    Now this time of my life
    is filled with tears, pain, and sorrow.
    Time could now stand still
    and I would find that I am still lost.
    Time is all I have
    Time is my worst enemy.
    All there is
    is time.




    Submitted on 2006-11-29 16:24:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked this a lot the word flow and the feeling of the poem. It is so true and easy to be brought into very well done

    | Posted on 2006-12-07 00:00:00 | by FLHgg | [ Reply to This ]
      a sad poem, it flowed well, it,s true about time though, it gives and it takes and it can be endless, depends on the situation. nice work
    gerry
    | Posted on 2006-11-29 00:00:00 | by bogeyman | [ Reply to This ]


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