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    dots Submission Name: I think of Youdots
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    Author: Martha McEntire
    ASL Info:    34/f/Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 27/25/22
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Misc/Longing
    Total Views: 674
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 571



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    dotsI think of Youdots
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    I sit and think of you
    as I always do.
    My heart and soul
    I gave to you.
    You broke my heart
    and tore out my soul.
    Still I'm in love with you
    even though you still don't know what to do.
    My life will never be the same
    and thanks to you I have someone to blame.
    Days and nights go by
    and still I think of you.
    How long will this hurt last?
    All of our love and laughter has come to pass.
    You will always have my heart
    even if we have to part.




    Submitted on 2006-11-29 16:26:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      that reminds me of the things i'm going threw... you really just put it out there... you should look at mine and tell me what you think....
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by crazynb3autiful | [ Reply to This ]


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