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    dots Submission Name: Special Someonedots
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    Author: Martha McEntire
    ASL Info:    34/f/Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 27/25/22
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsSpecial Someonedots
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    Sometimes in our lives we meet that special someone that we can't live without.
    We need them more than air itself.
    The love is so strong that you can feel it with only a single glance of the eye.
    It is so strong that the passion between the two is so perfect it can't be compared to diamonds or gold.
    The touch from the one you love is a sensation that you can't erase from your memory no matter how hard you try.
    I close my eyes and even though your hands aren't on my body i can still feel them there.
    No matter how hard I try I know I can't ever live my life without my special someone.




    Submitted on 2006-11-29 17:27:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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