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    dots Submission Name: The Day Will Comedots
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    Author: Martha McEntire
    ASL Info:    34/f/Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 27/25/22
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Misc/Angry
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    dotsThe Day Will Comedots
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    The day will come
    when your heart will need me.
    You will finally realize
    just how good I was for you.

    The day will come
    that you see
    not only with your eyes
    but with your heart.

    The day will come
    that you will be lonely
    no one there to love
    no one there to hold.

    The day will come
    when you shed tears
    tears for what might have been
    tears for what you threw away.

    The day will come
    when I will leave you
    leave all my love on the floor
    that way you don't have to jump
    so high to stomp on my heart anymore.




    Submitted on 2006-11-29 17:28:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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