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    dots Submission Name: Find Myselfdots
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    Author: Martha McEntire
    ASL Info:    34/f/Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 27/25/22
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFind Myselfdots
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    Find Myself
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    I can't seem to find myself,
    I'm lost to everyone.
    I've been searching,
    and yet see no light to reach for.
    You see me as this person,
    a person who can figure it all out.
    How is that possible?
    When I can't find myself.
    I feel as if my eyes are blind,
    Blind to the image in the mirror.
    I'm not there anymore,
    Or am I?
    How can I be?
    I can't seem to find myself.
    I wear the mask everyday,
    only because it is easy on the outside.
    I'll keep searching...
    searching for me.







    Submitted on 2006-11-29 17:30:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sometimes it is hard to find ourselves. The trick is really knowing where to look.

    Your write is very honest and very good.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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