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    dots Submission Name: For the Soldiersdots
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    Author: Martha McEntire
    ASL Info:    34/f/Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 27/25/22
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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    dotsFor the Soldiersdots
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    As I sit and listen to the news
    I shed tears for all the soldiers.
    Loved ones that will not be home
    for the holidays with their families.

    My heart goes out to all
    to all that shed tears
    for their loved ones
    that will not be home this year.

    They fight and die
    for us who will be here.
    What a price to pay
    and we should hold it dear.

    Prayers go out
    to all over there.
    Wishes being said
    that soon they will be here.




    Submitted on 2006-11-29 17:31:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      different kind of poem but i liked it. soldiers are like the forgotten heroes in a way. i,m sure none of them wanted to go to iraq or afghanistan,but the don,t get asked they get ordered, to save and help the locals. only to find out when they get there they aren,t wanted.i am glad i was never in the army.
    gerry
    | Posted on 2006-12-06 00:00:00 | by bogeyman | [ Reply to This ]
      This was cool, I like the message behind it. It is really sad that all these soldiers are dying for someone elses government. But anyways, there are ways you can help. Theres websites, if you don't know this already, where you can get names of soldiers and you can write them letters and send them care packages with stuff they need or to help pass the time, like cards or water bottles. If you go to google, you could probably just type in care packages for soldiers, and it might give you links.


    Hope that helps,

    Lia
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by Glassy Eyed | [ Reply to This ]


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